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Thank you Mr. Moribund! Thank you Aart Hilal! Thank you Readers!
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Published: Sep.21.2007 @ 5:18 pm | Last edited: Sep.21.2007 @ 4:52 am

Word really do have power.

Words really do have power. I like this poem because it points that out. Too many jaded academic poets have lost sight of that. You'd think as poets they would know better, but strangely enough they don't (or worse, they don't care.) Hopefully we'll never have that problem. On a side note -- Stephen King wrote a book called "On Writing." While I'm not a huge fan of his stuff (I like some), this particular book stands out, and in it he asks the fundamental question "what is writing?" In my mind he gave the perfect answer: "Telepathy, of course." At first I thought he was just being funny, but on reflection I realized that it was quite profound. It's a lesson the entire Internet could stand to learn.

Some few in that, but Numbers err in this,
Ten Censure wrong for one who Writes amiss;
A Fool might once himself alone expose,
Now One in Verse makes many more in Prose.
-- Alexander Pope

 


After flattering me with the guidance of The Mr. Walter Whitman, the above message made me realize that my blogs are my hobby no more, they reach out to people. And I learn so much from them. Indeed, Mr. Moribund is right, "Words really do have power." And as long that I can find some words, I will continue to write.

 

Thank you too to Aart Hilal for leaving your comment and inviting me in Coelho's circle. I visited his blog and subscribed in his newsletter. And so with "The Warrior of Light" (I haven't started reading it though, but it is in my reading list of "soon to be read").

 

God speed everyone!

 

And hope you continue reading my blogs. I welcome your comments with much enthusiasm.

 

 

Who is Walt Whitman?
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Published: Sep.19.2007 @ 7:03 pm | Last edited: Sep.19.2007 @ 6:12 am

Walt Whitman

Born on May 31, 1819, Walt Whitman was the second son of Walter Whitman, a housebuilder, and Louisa Van Velsor. The family, which consisted of nine children, lived in Brooklyn and Long Island in the 1820s and 1830s. At the age of twelve Whitman began to learn the printer's trade, and fell in love with the written word. Largely self-taught, he read voraciously, becoming acquainted with the works of Homer, Dante, Shakespeare, and the Bible. Whitman worked as a printer in New York City until a devastating fire in the printing district demolished the industry. In 1836, at the age of 17, he began his career as teacher in the one-room school houses of Long Island. He continued to teach until 1841, when he turned to journalism as a full-time career. He founded a weekly newspaper, Long-Islander, and later edited a number of Brooklyn and New York papers. In 1848, Whitman left the Brooklyn Daily Eagle to become editor of the New Orleans Crescent. It was in New Orleans that he experienced at first hand the viciousness of slavery in the slave markets of that city.

On his return to Brooklyn in the fall of 1848, he founded a "free soil" newspaper, the Brooklyn Freeman, and continued to develop the unique style of poetry that later so astonished Ralph Waldo Emerson. In 1855, Whitman took out a copyright on the first edition of Leaves of Grass, which consisted of twelve untitled poems and a preface. He published the volume himself, and sent a copy to Emerson in July of 1855. Whitman released a second edition of the book in 1856, containing thirty-three poems, a letter from Emerson praising the first edition, and a long open letter by Whitman in response. During his subsequent career, Whitman continued to refine the volume, publishing several more editions of the book.

At the outbreak of the Civil War, Whitman vowed to live a "purged" and "cleansed" life. He wrote freelance journalism and visited the wounded at New York-area hospitals. He then traveled to Washington, D.C. in December 1862 to care for his brother who had been wounded in the war. Overcome by the suffering of the many wounded in Washington, Whitman decided to stay and work in the hospitals. Whitman stayed in the city for eleven years. He took a job as a clerk for the Department of the Interior, which ended when the Secretary of the Interior, James Harlan, discovered that Whitman was the author of Leaves of Grass, which Harlan found offensive. Harlan fired the poet.

Whitman struggled to support himself through most of his life. In Washington he lived on a clerk's salary and modest royalties, and spent any excess money, including gifts from friends, to buy supplies for the patients he nursed. He had also been sending money to his widowed mother and an invalid brother. From time to time writers both in the states and in England sent him "purses" of money so that he could get by.

In the early 1870s, Whitman settled in Camden, where he had come to visit his dying mother at his brother's house. However, after suffering a stroke, Whitman found it impossible to return to Washington. He stayed with his brother until the 1882 publication of Leaves of Grass gave Whitman enough money to buy a home in Camden. In the simple two-story clapboard house, Whitman spent his declining years working on additions and revisions to a new edition of the book and preparing his final volume of poems and prose, Good-Bye, My Fancy (1891). After his death on March 26, 1892, Whitman was buried in a tomb he designed and had built on a lot in Harleigh Cemetery.

A Selected Bibliography

Poetry

Drum Taps (1865)
Good-Bye, My Fancy (1891)
Leaves of Grass (1855)
Leaves of Grass (1856)
Leaves of Grass (1860)
Leaves of Grass (1867)
Leaves of Grass (1870)
Leaves of Grass (1876)
Leaves of Grass (1881)
Leaves of Grass (1891)
Passage to India (1870)
Sequel to Drum Taps (1865)

Prose

Complete Prose Works (1892)
Democratic Vistas (1871)
Franklin Evans; or, The Inebriate (1842)
Memoranda During the War (1875)
November Boughs (1888)
Specimen Days and Collect (1881)

(courtesy of http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/126)

Encouraging Comments from Poets 3
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Published: Sep.19.2007 @ 6:57 pm

I am a dozen pens

A dozen pens
An array of bright colored features
Their tears creatively spilled love
Danced with strength and fear
Spoke a dozen happiness
Slashed the tranquility of peace
Healed the woundedness of grace.

A dozen pens
An array of dark stained beings
Their blood shed enlightenment
Crossed the hollowness of mortals
Conveyed a dozen cynicism
Paralyzed the greatness of valiance
Filled the emptiness of faith.

A dozen pens
An array of encapsulated truth
Their pride ridiculed humility
Laughed over the cries of oppression
Wrote a dozen prejudice
Silenced the whimpering of justice
Resurrected the crippledness of honor.

A dozen pens
An array of estranged creatures
Their poignance crumbled holied esteems
Chose between beauty and wisdom
Mimicked a dozen insecurities
Gagged the shouts of confidence
Pulsated nothing but I.

I am a dozen pens
I can be an array of bright colored features
I can be an array of dark stained beings
I can be an array of encapsulated truth
I can be an array of estranged creatures
Whatever that I am… is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
My tears can creatively spill love
My blood can shed forth enlightenment
My pride can ridicule the humble
My poignance can crumble the esteem of others
Whatever that I can… is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
I dance with strength and fear
I cross the hollowness of mortals
I laugh over the cries of the oppressed
I choose between beauty and wisdom
Whatever that I do… is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
I speak of happiness
I convey cynicism
I write about prejudice
I mimic insecurities of the world and I
Whatever that I impart… is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
I slash the tranquility of peace
I paralyze the greatness of valiance
I silence the whimpering of justice
I gag the shouts of confidence
Whatever that I execute… is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
I heal the woundedness of grace
I fill the emptiness of faith
I resurrect the crippledness of honor
I pulsate nothing but myself
I … is my choice.

I am a dozen pens
My thoughts can be an enemy or a friend
My words can be a dagger or a rose
My actions can be a curse or a blessing
I can hurt or heal.

I am a dozen pens
I am.

(posted: http://www.everypoet.net/poetry/blogs/cabanata)


Well done. The repetition in

Well done. The repetition in stanza five works nicely as does the extended metaphor throughout. Once more I get the feeling that the ghost of Whitman is looking over your shoulder as you write. Your style is different than his, but it has the same feel (to me at least.) Godspeed.

Encouraging Comments from Poets 2
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Published: Sep.19.2007 @ 6:49 pm

I am a Poet

I am a poet.
My hands shake in ecstasy
upon the sight of
pens and blank sheets scattered
about carelessly on my desk.

I am a poet.
My forehead in its wrinkled
state impress wealth
of reflection, inspired by
the magnificence of nature.

I am a poet.
My blood streams passion in
every heartbeat;
words flow in my thoughts like a
river finding its way to the sea.

I am a poet.
My adrenaline rush through
raptured veins as my
senses amuse themselves with
the lavish colors of my hurt.

I am a poet.
My creative archetype
groove with festive thumps
as silence bounce about in
rhythmic union with my laughter.

I am a poet
by virtue of who I am
and what I feel as
I seek of an avenue,
I write my life space with faith
and ardor of a craftsman
that indeed I am
a POET.

(another post in http://www.everypoet.net/poetry/blogs/cabanata)


Indeed you are. This has

Indeed you are. This has kind of a vague Whitmanesque feel to it. That's the impression I get anyway. A lot of his stuff was a celebration of something, as is this. Nothing wrong with that. Cheers.

Encouraging Comments from Poets
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Published: Sep.19.2007 @ 6:36 pm

Silence

What does silence mean to you?

I have known silence as God’s time
a chance for Him to say His piece
after we have expressed our litany of wants.

Silence is nature’s expression of Her peace and beauty
of the wondrous unity of atoms
to block the sounds of agony, contempt, injustice and indifference
man has waged against himself.

Silence is the introspection of the soul
to find an alternative venom to extinguish
the wrath of temptation.

But after Mama’s death
silence has developed itself in its cruelest form.
Saying nothing.
Hearing nothing.
And all these hubbub of soundlessness
have suddenly and sickeningly turned into a terror
with all its shape and the feel of it
all its spiky little corners.

This silence is not silence at all…
It signifies death.
Breathing has been defeated.
Surrendered altogether.
And I can hear the expletive-ridden chatter
of my own mourning, mixed with anger.
To what?
For whom?
I really just do not know.

My pain cannot be displaced
by any amount of consolation.
Not then.
Not now.
Not ever.
Losing a mother as beloved as mine
is agonizingly tormenting.

That to me is silence.

Today is Mom's birthday. She's supposed to be celebrating her 51st year as a mortal. We're celebrating it still though -- almost 48 years of existence and for the last three years... in our memories.

 

(another post in http://www.everypoet.net/poetry/blogs/cabanata/)


Time will heal...

This a good one, and it so touching. Silence, when reason is absent and the pain is evident, silence when love one departed and a vacuum is created. Time can, but a little tick, tick, take away the memory...

Potpourri
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Published: Sep.14.2007 @ 5:33 pm

Potpourri
he showed me beauty
painted more than seven colors
of the rainbow,
showered me not of chocolates,
flowers and precious stuff
but he gave me his life.

Hodgepodge
he sings me a medley
nobody knows when he’ll stop
hope he won’t because
his voice delights my senses
and when I close my eyes
his presence seems all over me.

Odds and ends
he tied my shoelace to the ground
thought I would not be able to run
but instead I flew to my dreams.
“To be or not to be?”
he asked with an irresistible charm.
I answered, “Stay beside me.”

Bits and bobs
everything is He…
a mixture of hues of amber,
bright velvety drops of mist,
a rush of crimson waves
touching my soles on the sand
as I rest my heart and life to thee…

(another post in http://www.everypoet.net/poetry/blogs/cabanata/)

Sweet!

Very pretty images and melodic.

Odds and ends
he tied my shoelace to the ground
thought I would not be able to run
but instead I flew to my dreams.
“To be or not to be?”
he asked with an irresistible charm.
I answered, “Stay beside me.”

Happiness of a Writer
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Published: Sep.14.2007 @ 5:09 pm | Last edited: Sep.14.2007 @ 4:51 am

I learn

I learn
from the smell of dried leaves
from the sight of blank sheets
from the touch of wrinkled skin
from the taste of spoiled wishes.

I learn
from the silence of the wind
from the roar of the tides
from the turmoil of the clouds
from the strength of the sun.

I learn
from the hard work of the soil
from the wealth of the ocean
from the wages of the devoted
from the truth of the unfortunate.

I learn
from the shouts on the streets
from the whispers of clandestine lovers
from the hails of feigned churchgoers
from the blood shed of warriors.

I learn
from the most glamorous get-ups
from the tattered of his sleeves
from their make believed happiness
from their victorious sighs.

I learn
from the lowest of creatures
from the proudest monsters
from the most sublime feature
from the scariest beast.

I learn
from the look upon your face
from the sadness in your stare
from the joy on your lips
from the droop upon your shoulder.

I learn
from the unwritten essays he wrote
from the muted songs she sang
from the blank canvasses he painted
from the unspoken love she conveyed.

I learn
from the infancy of the old
from the wickedness of evil
from the humble dominance of good
from the misunderstood language of man.

I learn
from the humility in your entrance
from the painfulness of your exit
from the grandeur of your return
from the faith that you will.

(I posted this poem earlier in Mangoes, Bamboos and Poems of this site)

 

I accidentally browsed over a site on poetry. I tried registering and luckily, the administrator gave me a space. I think that was months ago but I wasn't able to post a single poem because I feared nobody would read it. You see, the poems I read posted on this site are really great. I mean, what is my poem compared to their creations. Just last week, I recieved another invite from them, this time, they made a newer format and it seems more friendly for me. So I tried. I started posting. Then with my poem "I Learn", here is what two poets have to say:

 

You'll do for me

Superbly written. Well done.

 

Thus, I step further to reach my dream and have that one big star inside my pocket. Wishful thinking? What do you think?

 

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Published: Sep.11.2007 @ 6:17 pm

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